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My Gift

If you were my gift I would

Unwrap you painfully slow
Savor each part of your beauty as it is revealed.
Take your hand in mine.

Carry you to my bed
Share the passion only true love knows.
Pray we two made three.

Hold you wrapped in my arms
Protected from harm near my heart now yours.
Joined both body and soul.

Place you on a pedestal
Express my un-deservedness of your love
Admired by more than me.

If you were my gift

I would sit and admire
The beautiful aura of your lovely smile.

If you were my gift
I would shake with delight
As I unwrap the wonder of your love.

If you were my gift
I should want no more
Of gifts or other earthly pleasures.

If you were my gift
I would share my bed
I would share my life
I would share my dreams

With my precious, once in a lifetime
Gift.